a: passive voice ~
b: spilling hot coffee in your lap

What:

"Using the passive voice is like spilling hot coffee in your lap on an unfamiliar road: it forces the audience to focus on other things that the road you are laying out ahead of them."


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Writer: Randy J. Harvey, Ph.D.
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Date: Aug 24 2015 6:32 PM


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